A work-in-progress... I'm mostly happy with it, but not sure about the last line. Should it end at 'replace' I wonder?
Exclusion principle 
Stranger, 
who, so the small plaque says, 
loved this spot, 
you could not have sat here, 
for the seat was placed in your memory, 
greatly missed by some friend or relative. 
Did they share your view 
over scrubby downs 
and patchy woodland where coppicemen, 
smelters and charcoal-burners 
once fed those 
hungry for iron. 
  I choose not to sit, 
but stay to watch a hornet 
scrape pulp for her nest, 
taking papier-mâché mouthfuls 
of you 
from oak slat and upright. 
If I return in a ten-year, 
will weather, fungus, woodworm, 
or vandals at play, 
have done their work, 
leaving just a level patch of grass 
where council employees 
tossed your remains into a flatbed, 
for it is policy to neither repair 
nor replace
deaths marked by furniture.
I vote for keeping the last line, somehow it opened a whole new window in my brain.
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